Article submitted to One Shot Photography ‘s Picture Prompt.
Image by Sean.
Photo clicked by Sean
Galileo said Earth revolves around Sun,
But here Universe is revolving around Earth,
This is looking like magic, I am having fun,
Will I see this in reality in my next birth?
The grass is looking like bunch of rose plums,
Instead of yellow, it has chosen color pink,
The grass buds are clinging like real chums,
Underneath the roots, there is only one link
I don’t know why the house has gotten blue,
The stars are gyrating him, doesn’t have any clue
Is it envy or shy that has colored his inside red?
It is the only house on earth, somewhere he read
The World Through My Eyes... 
Is it envy or shy that has colored his inside red?… cool question – i always like well-placed questions in poems..
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Thank you Claudia 🙂
but somehow I am not fully comfortable and satisfied with this poem, I don’t know why.
I feel there is something missing 😦
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I think it is a brilliant idea that you took the rotational look of the stars and began with the earth as the center of the universe. Nice!
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Thank you Adam 🙂
That was the only thought that could come to my mind 😀
I couldn’t think from grains perspective as you have done 😦
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Like the way you’ve turned it on it’s head here hun. Interesting read and plenty to read about
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Thank you 🙂 I am honored to hear that you find my articles/posts readable 🙂
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nice…our world i believe has gone back to believing it revolves around us…and yes it might be that color red inside…
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Thanks Brian. Yes, we as in Earth might be revolving around the Sun and the Universe in turn but then most important activities happen here on Earth only 🙂 As life is here, or may be not. There might be something parallel to our life form 🙂
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It seems to me that something important is happening to the person in the poem. To the poetic subject. A milestone. Birth ? Death ? Re- Birth. The rhyme is very good and so is the reference to color. I loved this esoteric query. This existential lurk… Good work.
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Thank you very much 🙂 Appreciate your comment 🙂
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Nice reflections, feeling the colors of the night, wondering the house’s thoughts… I like it.
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Thank you very much 🙂
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There’s a huge sense of the magic of the cosmos in this piece..and the way you have translated the colours in the picture to the words is sparkling..thanks for your visit..Jae..
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Thank you Jae for stopping by and commenting on my post 🙂
I am glad that you liked it 🙂
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Such an interesting spin on this picture..literal yet abstract all at once. Well done!
Here’s mine:
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Thank you 🙂 Your’s is also beautiful 🙂
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Yup I liked the change 🙂
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Thank you dear 🙂
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oohhh.. i like your take on this one, Prasad.. some very well thought questions too… the ‘envy or shy’ bit was really super cool!!
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Thank you very much Kavita 🙂
Really appreciate you stopping by and commenting 🙂
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Fun read, love the end-lines.
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