Day 3 Post for “OctPoWriMo“. Today’s prompt – “Lets write a Poem about Why We wrote that very first poem.”
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Brought up in a family,
Filled with poems,
Spiritual or sarcastic,
Fun or sardonic,
The blood always had,
Words along with platelets,
The organs always had,
A sense of rhyme,
The eyes always searched,
For the nuances,
To bind them with words,
And yet set them free
* * *
But it needed a self cursing,
For those words to come out,
Like a free flowing water,
A disgusted punch in the palm,
To make them write,
As soon as they reach the tips,
A sense of futility,
For wasting so much of time,
To make the juices flow
* * *
Since then the mind,
Remembers all of this,
Recognizes the prompts,
From the surrounding,
Tries to devise a poem,
Conventional or abstract,
Rhyming or not,
But it blows in life,
And makes it sound poetic.
— @pbkulkarni
Funny how it got us all as children. As though words are born within us, like an eyeball or a finger. 🙂
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Haha… true 😛
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This was well expressed 🙂
Liked the first set of lines a lot 🙂
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Thanks Nimu 🙂
And I am not very convinced with the next two parts. A line or two in between should have been there to sew it properly in the poem. I will try to rework it later 🙂
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Same i felt for my poem. Good luck.
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wow. I could so relate to this piece 🙂 Lovely 🙂
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Thank you Lady 🙂 Glad you liked it…
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My two favorite lines: “Spiritual or sarcastic” (made me think about perhaps combining the two into something spiritually sarcastic…lol); “The blood always had words along with platelets” YES! Poetry is in our blood! I really like this poem!
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Thank you 🙂 Glad you like it…
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Amazingly Written. Its always a special post which depicts the love for our first poetry.
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Thank you sir 🙂 Indeed. Very special feeling it is…
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beautifully written
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Glas you liked it 🙂
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