Today’s Prompt: “Never Ending Space”
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You are an angel,
I am a mere mortal,
Distance between us,
Is like between Earth and Sun,
Attracting, but can’t come close.
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Prompted at: May Challenge Prompts [Day 10]
Today’s Prompt: “Never Ending Space”
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You are an angel,
I am a mere mortal,
Distance between us,
Is like between Earth and Sun,
Attracting, but can’t come close.
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Prompted at: May Challenge Prompts [Day 10]
Well written!! Loved last two lines most! 🙂
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Thanks Devendra 🙂
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beautifully written 🙂
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Thank You Shubhra 🙂
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one should never stop trying, nothing is impossible in love. 🙂
trisha
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Yes I know 😛 One should never stop trying..
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Really enjoyed your tanka. Forbidden love is always a great subject for poetry!
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fabulous 5 lines described everything
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